These are the comments made by her school teacher:
Story is relevant to pictures.
Content is quite interesting.
Ideas are well-linked with some attempt at paragraphing.
Her marks for content: 3.5/5
(2) Language and Organisation
Fairly good use of appropriate vocabulary.
Fairly consistent use of tenses.
Several errors in spelling/punctuation/grammar
Her marks for language: 2.5/5
Grand Total: 6/10
My student has many ideas when it comes to composition writing so she is better in content but she needs to brush up on her spelling.